My Own Story

This is my 1st post of my own written story, Soon I am posting the English Version of this Story.     

        Hey I am Kapil Deb, Aditya. An Aspiring writer & Film maker. I consider Rabindranath Tagore as my role model. I follow his concepts ("shes hoyeo hoyna shes”) of writing. Basically I write stories based on Real Life. I aim to be a great Film Director by virtue of hard work, sincerity, dedication, and fear of almighty god.

          Here I want to present some of my stories for my readers. I want all my readers to comment on the story whether it’s good or bad and also please do comment how to make it better or how to present it in a more interesting way. I write my stories like the scripts of a film because I want to publish my stories as a Film. In other words I can say that I write my stories imagining a video-format.

          I write stories based on real life. I write my stories in such a way that I can present it like three hours entertaining film with endings, story climax and lots more whether the story is based on Love Horror or Suspense. I want my readers not to consider me as a writer which I am not. I do not have the potentiality to be a writer but still I try to be a good writer keeping endlessly trying and present my stories before you.

          A request for the reader that when you read the story imagine that you are watching a short film and not reading a book.   

          Note: ঐ গল্পটি পুরোপুরি কাল্পনিক, ঐ গল্প লিখার কারণটি, গল্পের শেষে বুজতে পারবেন.        

            Shokal 11ta. Rajiber college nei bole, shea samay katanor jonno tar bhondur dokaner udeshea chollo. Taar bhondur dokhan ti holo Applo bole eakti CD/DVD house er opposite a, ja holo okhankar Landmark. Rajib maje majei or bhondur dokane adda daye.

            Rajib ke ashte dheke, Suman boll uthlo "ki re aaj naki college nei, tai eato shoka, aamar dokane? Rajib  kichu na bole chup kore thaklo, eabong ghare dhuke bollo "Na,college bhondo. Ar kholar por kichu din jabo na bhabchi, fee deybr taka nei. Tai college ta kichu diner jonno bhondo rakte hobe. Tui bhabte parish? Rana sir r Ashim Paul er taka tau dite parini. Ki korbo bol?" Suman bujte parlo j Rajib er mon te bhalo noi. Tai shea oky osob bhulanor jonno bole uthlo"ki r korbi bol, ne cha kha". "Thanks re." Eai bolte bolte hotat Apploer dike Rajib er chok gelo, Eabong Rajib bole uthlo "Suman Appolo te oi meye ta ke? Appolo new sales woman raklo naki?"Suman heshea bollo "Hmm… sunechi meyetar Baba mara geychen. Bishnu da er meye ta eakyee gramer. Baba nei, ghar to chalate hobe tai Bishnu da k bollo tar jonno kichu eakta kaaj dekhe dite, tokhon Bishnu Da oke nijer dokaner offer dilo, meye ta raji holo. Gotho 5 din theke meye ta Appolo te kaaj korchea,bujli?" Shune Rajib bollo "Sotti Bishnu da kintu khubi bhalo kaj korechen, Bhogowan unar bhalo koruk. Jani na, Bhogowan amar kobe bhalo  korben."bole Rajib chup kore shei meye tir dike cheay thaklo.

            Porer din Rajib aabar Suman er dukane ashlo. Ahea joto samayi boshlo tar chok chilo appolo er dike. Eamon kore Rajib besh kichu din Suman er dukane, meye ta k dakte ashte thaklo. Eai dekhe Suman eak din Rajib k jigasha korlo "ki rey tui to aamr dukane eto ghono ghono astish na? kintu aajkal dakchi, khub jemon……... bepar ta ki? bujlam na." Rajib bolte na cheyeao bollo "bepar te temon eakta kichu noi. Hoyechea ta ki, oi din meye ta ke dekhe ghar a giye bhate bhate kemon jani laglo. Bhablam baba mora meye, ar ghar chalanor jonno baire baire kaaj korte hochea. Janish? Eai sob bheabe keno jani choke jol ashea geylo. Tai keno jani meye ta ke dakte chole aashi tor dukane." "Keno jani!!! ki bolish tui? Tui eato kichu kore fhelechis ar tui bolish kina,, tui naki nijai janis na, j tui keno dakte ashis. Kotha ta hojom holo na boss. Tar mane....." Suman na parte bolai fhello “Tar mane tui prem teme proli naki?” Rajib shune ashchurjo hoye bollo "Preeeemeeee porlam!!! Tor matha kharap hoyechea Suman daktar dekha. Aami jani, tor eamoni kichu eakta bhabna ashbe." Eakhon Rajib birokto hoyei bollo "Dhak Suman tui ultapulta kotha bole amake confuse korish na tho. Eamni tai kotho chinta,ar uni bolen naki Preme porechi"Suman oke bhujanor jonno bollo "Arey aamake bolte tho de. Dhek, aami janina tor eata prem, naki onno kichu. Kintu, aami boli better hobe je tui oor shate kota bole dhire dhire friendship kor. Eate tui or bepare bhalo kore janteo parbi er oke helpo korte parbi.""friendship!!! Eakhon bujte perechi je sotti tor matha ta geychea”. Tarpor Suman er hajar bhujanor por Rajib bole uthlo  “Aacha bujlam sobi, kintu friendship kemon kore? kemon kore friendship korbo?”“Arey,,,, ja dokane ja, or shate kota bol. Bhoi pash na" "Tui pagal hoyechis naki? Bina karone dokane jabo, r kota bolbo. Meye ta ki bhabe? Amake puro faltu chelae bhabbe." "Are pagol, bina karone jabi keno. DVD kinte jabi. Lifea to kunu dinno DVD kinish  nai. Atlest eakon tho kina hobe."Rajib bishmoikor bhabe bole uthlo "Ki!!!! DVD!!!!! R Ami!!!! tui to janish je amar ai GaaN TaaN.. FilM  TilM, eai gulo mutai bhalo lagey na. Aamar to shudu kobitaaaa...Aahahahaa….Ar DVD j kinte  jabo. Tak ke debe shuni? Aamar naki fee debari taka nei, r DVD kinbo." "dhak bhai aamar tho lagchea, eai e eakta bhalo way aaecha ja diye tui or shate onayeshe kotha bolte parbi, tai bhai aamar bolte hochea j DVD na kina chara r to kunu podhoti nai. Tho taka joger koro. Nahole tho r kichu hobe na. Bujli Rajib? bhondu?."Rajib ki eakta buje jeno matha naralo eabong hotat bole uthlo “tik aachea ami koyek din pore ashchi DVD kinar jonno. Deki ki kora jai.”

        Pach din por

            "Suman notun ki DVD kena jai? Bolto? karon eai sob niye to amar kunu idea nai." Suman ohbak hoye jigasha korlo "Taka aanechis? kotha theke peli taka?" "Pore bolchi. Tui aagey bol j giye kun DVDir kotho giye bolbo." Suman Rajiber utdesho kore bollo "Ja,, giye bolbi, kuno new film er DVD dite.""aacha dak tor aashai jachi kichu ulto palto hole shamliye nibi" thokoni Suman bole uthlo "shun...Best of Luck".

            "Aijee shuchen? Aami kichu new DVD kinte chai”  Rajib appolo te giye shei meye k giye bollo "Arey Rajib! New DVD lahey? eai Sumi oke kichu new DVD dekha to.."  Rajib ke dekhe Bishnu da, aachea bollo.

            30min por Suman er dokane Rajib fhire ashlo. Rajib ke dekhea Suman bollo "ki re??? ki holo? kichu  bolechey?"Rajib olpo muchki heyshey bollo "bolechey...Pore bollo. Eakhon jachi re.." bolei Rajib hashi mukhea,, druto dokhan theke chole gyelo. "kire tui je sob porey bolbi, porey bolbi  bolish, bepar taki?""Jai re Suman. Sob pore bolchi, hahaha"Suman cheachiye bole uthlo "Kichu bole to ja?" Rajib jete jete aabar bollo “Bolboooo..Porey bolbooooooooo." Eai bole Rajib chole  gelo.

            Eamon kore kore Rajib portek din Appolo teke eakti eakti korey DVD kinte laglo r eai shujugey oi meye tirer shate or dekha hote laglo. Kintu Rajib ja DVD gulo kinto ghare ashey eaigulo khultoi na. karon,Eake holo Rajibr eaigulo bhaloi lagto na o chilo kobita priyo manush. Ar holo or ghare DVD player ba Tap bole, kichui chilo na. Tai or DVD gulo khule dekhar kunu proshonoi uthay na. Kintu tobuo o DVD kinto karon oje Sumi k bhalobeshe felechey, hai Suman er kotai thik. Rajib tho Sumi ke bhalobeshey felechea thiki kintu eakhono moner kotha bolte pareni. Eai koyek din a Rajib eabong Sumi bhalo bhondu hoye geychea. Kintu rajib mone mone eai khotai bhabchea je, eato tuku bhonduthoi ki nijer moner kotha bola jai? Rajib bhoy pachea jodi or moner khota shune Sumi regey boshey r tai jodi Sumi or shate kokhono kotai na bole. tobe ki Rajib oke chara thakte parbe? ar sob theke boro prosno Rajibr mone jaglo je, Sumi ki oke bhalobashey??? Na Sumi Rajib ke eakti bhalo bhondur motoi dekhea.

            "Arey aaj j o ashcy na? or jonno notun DVD raklam. Kin o ashcy na keno? Suman ke, ki jagasha korbo? Na… thak… porey Suman jeno ki bhabe? Na kichu bhabe na, jai eakbar jigasha kore aashi je Rajib aaj ashte eato deri korchea keno" Eai sob kotha Sumi mone mone bhabte bhabte, Suman er dokane gelo. Eabong giye bollo "Suman da. Rajib da ashbe na aaj? Notun DVD ashlo tai bhablam, je oto aaj bedoi ashbe na tumakai bole dai."Suman eakti mushki heyshey bollo  "budoi aaj college a geychey, tumi rekhe dau, o kal ba porshu aashea niye nebe." kotha ta shune Sumir olpo mon kharap hoye gelo, eabong o bollo "thik aachea ta hole Suman da, ami jai, Dukane manush achey." Bole Sumi chole geylo.

            "Arey aajo Rajib ashlo na? ki holo? oidin to bolchilo j or shorir tab halo lagcheay na? joor-toor holo bhuji? ki korbo or ghar a jabo? or maa jodi kichu bolen? Dhur ki bolben, unar cheler ki bhondu hote parina?  kintu or ghar ta Nayaparai thik kun area te tauo jani ja. shudu eak bole bolechilo je JEEVAN DHARAr plant er ahey pashey. Aacha oikane giyai dekha jabe, kau ke bollei or ghar ta dekiye dite parbe. Aaj kaaj shes korai or ghar a jabo." Eai sob nanan dhoroner proshno Sumir mone jagte laglo, o thik korlo kaaj shere ferar potha rajibr ghare jabe.

            "Eaito JEEVAN DHARAr plant. eakanai kutaau hobe or ghar" bheabe Sumi raste diye jauya eakti choto bacha ke jigasha korlo. Bacha ta kichu na bole shudu engulf diye eak dike dekiye diye doure chole geylo. Sumi bujte parlo budoi oitai Rajibr ghar. Tai Sumi oi dike rouyana dilo.

            Sumi raastar dhar diye eakti shoru poth dhore eagiye jete laglo. Kichu khon porei shumi daklo eakti kure ghar eabong ghar er shamne eakti buro mohila boshey aschen. Sumir mohila tike dekhe unar boyosh andash kore bhablo, bhudoi 80-90 bhitore hobe. Sumi buro manush tike giye jigasha korlo. "Didima Rajib da ki ghare Aachen? ami unar bhondu”.Buro mohilati chup kore thaklo. Sumi aabar eakhe kotha jigasha korlo. Kintu eai baro Sumi kunu uttor pelo na, eamon ki uni sumir dike fhireo takan ni. Sumi ki korbe bhabte laglo, thokni pichon theke "kake chai?" eak jon manush aashea bollo. "Ami  Rajib da k khoj chilam. Uni ki ghar a aachen?" Uttorey manush ti eamon eakti kota bollo, j shune…………………..  

            (Camera, close up shoot on Sumi’s face) khota ta shune Sumir chok teke jol porte laglo. "Rajib koy din theke Rose Vally korte suru korlo. Jani na hotat korey or takar ki proujon ashlo. Kal bikele cycle niye jachilo, or customer er ghar a rastai eakti trak pichon theke ashey okey dhaka marlo." Manush ti olpo themea bollo. "gothona sholei or mritu hoy. Khabar shune aamra jai, kintu totho kone…" Sumir chok theke eakar por eak asru jol porte thaklo. Kintu o nije k shamliye nilo. "Eni  Rajib er Thakumaa. or maa baba nei mara geychen. Enio kane sunte paren na. ar kal theke kichu khacheno na. Rajibi chilo unor eak matro shahara." Sumi nije ke shamliye niye bollo "aapni ki or room a aamake niye jetan parben, aami olpo or room ta dakte chai?" Manush ta Sumi ke or ghare niye gelo. Or ghar a dhuke, Packing kora DVD gulo dekheyy Sumi r nije k atkate parlo na o jure jure chitkar korey kadte laglo. Sumi sob DVD er packing gulo khule, eakti chiti ber korey porte laglo

                        Dear, Rajib kemon korey bolbo j tumake koto bhalobashi. Jani meye ra kunu dino aagey nijer moner khota bolena, kintu ki korbo tumake na bole thakte parcina, r tumar aashai boshea thakle hobena tai nejai liklam. I **** U. chiti ta porey kal bolbe please. Tumar uttorer ashai roilam. Eti tumar Sumi.

            Tarpor Sumi aro eakta Packing khule porte laglo "Ki holo kichu je bolle na? rag korle buji? Rajib tar mane ki tumar friendship tau bhule jabo? Jodi bhul hoye thake maaf korey diyo…"

            Sumi Rajib ke portak ta DVD te love letter likto. Kintu Rajib oi DVD gulo kokono khulai dakto na. Ar Sumi eaigulo kunu dino bujte pary nai. O bhabto je Rajib oi chiti gulo pore. Tai Sumi packing kora DVD gulo dekey jure jure kadte theke.........karon Sumu j oke bhalobasto Rajib ta jantoi na.

            Sumi janalar shamne dariye sob chiti gulo khule khule porte theke. R Rajibr sangey katano samay gulor kotha smiti hoye tar choke bhaste thake. Pichon theke Suman aashea oke shantona dilo…

                        Camera janalar bairey theke odar ke Zoomout korey.eabong Trolita Pan hoye move hote theke.

            Cut...Cut....Cut Aami awaaz dai…

                                   

                                                Written And Dricted by KAPIL DEB

Ending Song of this Film

                         

Bolo keno eamon hoy.. napauyor ortho ta ke bhalobhasha koy

Bolo keno eamon hoy.. eak chimti shuk pauyata bhalobhasha koy

Bolo kenoooooo eamon hoy

Bolo kenoooooo eamon hoy

(Ridoy chire gele tumi sobar majeyau aaj eakla ami

Prithbi ta boro sunno mone hoy)2

Bolo keno eamon hoy.. napauyor ortho ta ke bhalobhasha koy

Bolo kenoooooo eamon hoy

Bolo kenoooooo eamon hoy

(Aadhar ghar a eakla ami swapna theke duswapne nami

Smiti guli sob pichon porey roy)2

Bolo keno eamon hoy.. napauyor ortho ta ke bhalobhasha koy

Bolo keno eamon hoy.. napauyor ortho ta ke bhalobhasha koy

Bolo keno eamon hoy.. eak chimti shuk pauyata bhalobhasha koy

Bolo kenoooooo eamon hoy

Bolo kenoooooo eamon hoyeeeeeeee.....................

Download this song click here

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Eai golpoti likhar pichoneo eakta golpo aachey. 2005 a jokon ami guwahati theke Dharmanagare ashi. Eakdin Appolo te CD aante giye Jante pari je Bishnu dar choto bahi mara geychey current shock legey. Oi bhair shate aamar bhalo china jana chilo Guwahati te jabar aagey ami Appolo theke onek CD niyechi tokon or shate bhalo cinajana hoy. or mara jabar khabar shune bohot kharap lagey. Raatre ghar a or khata bhabte bhabte Eakti golpo banate thaki. golpo tir kunu kichui or sangey related noi. Aamar eai golpota oi chele ti ke dedicate korlam.